Dedicated to Noor <3
Memories flitting on the edge of consciousness,
Shadows of the past pushed aside, abandoned,
A word peddled; once spoken,
Broken dam of kept emotions gushing out, seared on each droplet;
I still miss you.
The syllables of your name a darkened hue on mine,
Sparks of a rainbow, nuance in your voice,
Voiceless thoughts breathed out,
Towering winds, angry skies raging, furious turmoil and tempest within,
All settled by your glance
Your poems always convey memories with each line, I absolutely love this one <3
ReplyDeleteI thought of a 7elwan areedch teketbeeli sha'3la :D <3
Love the words you use, makes it so elegant. You're such a good poet honestly.
ReplyDeleteI love how even tho it's short there's so much meaning in every line.
"All settled by your glance"
<3
And to think you wrote this from the top of your head and didn't edit. You're a natural. And I adore the dedication!!!
MashAllah, really.
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Won't you write me another one? <3
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